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lazy_boy
PostPosted: Sun May 27, 2012 6:02 pm 
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My most recent offering - this one's a wobbly bass groove type thing. As always any feedback is welcome!!


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tbh i think if you cut this down to half the length (rework the arrangement, make the intro shorter relative to the rest) then it would be much better. dont think it needs to be 6 minutes

maybe stick a riser in there before the drop

that weird/glitchy/percussion synth fx thing that starts at 1.17 gets a bit annoying after a bit but shortening the tune and making it a bit more immediate would help with that

cool sample btw :D

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thx for the feedback! this is the longest tune I've made so far, just sort of came together that way, usually I feel like my tunes need to be just a tad longer, which I find it exceedingly difficult to add to a tune once I've stepped back from it, but I've always thought cutting down would be much easier :-)

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Good sounds and well mixed but could do with some more variation

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Contepella wrote:
Good sounds and well mixed but could do with some more variation


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cool cool, thanks for the listen and for the advice, I'm formulating a plan for cutting down/shortening a few bits that I think will make things less repetitive, maybe also do something else to the bassline synth to make the last bit stand out more - cheers y'all!! :D

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here's an updated version, ended up not being a whole lot shorter than it was, but hopefully it's better than before?

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