Hey y'all, so here's another tune I'm hoping to get some critique on. Only just realized recently that we have this feedback forum apologies for not posting in the wrong place last couple of times.
Anyways, this tune is breaks with a bit of a progressive vibe. I wrote it mostly one night and the following day, so hopefully it has a consistent feel without being too repetitive. Of course any advice or thoughts welcome, technical or otherwise.
Joined: Wed Mar 02, 2005 1:20 am Posts: 3612 Location: Comox Valley, Canada
I like to hear the snare crack a little harder personally...but if you are going for a moody kinda feel...maybe some ethereal pads as well? See my SC comment as well
thanks J - been working on my snares quite a bit, listening back to this tune now seems like ages ago, when I was still verbing my whole snare, and compressing layers separately - might just go back and try improve the snare and fix the clippage or whatever (think I may just need to filter off some of the crushed highs in the bassline)
really appreciate your ears, still not "happy" with any of my work - but getting closer with each new project
Joined: Thu Oct 25, 2007 9:20 am Posts: 556 Location: Sheffield, England
There seems to be some timing issues with the drums and the bass lfo, just sounds abit off in places to me. good ideas but needs better processing to clean up the elements. keep at it
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apologies for not posting in the wrong place last couple of times.
I wrote it mostly one night and the following day, so hopefully it has a consistent feel without being too repetitive. Of course any advice or thoughts welcome, technical or otherwise.
